1. Using the AP style book efficently.
Ex: quiz #6 I missed the E-Trade by spelling it E-trade.
2. I have a tendency to be wordy.
Ex: quiz#17 my final sentence ran on. “Comedy Central also placed black bars over Muhammad. Also, the network bleeped out Muhammad’s dialogue.
3. I misuse use quotation.
Ex: quiz #18 “said the Senaor’s Manager- should be”the Senator’s Manager said.”