Photo courtesy of Flickr user Luiz Marques
A gloomy day with people covered with mud. Young boy lost and searching for someone or something. The boy glares motionless as if he is unsure of his next move. He stares with no emotions as if he is in fact dead to the world. Lost and confused this young child is all alone with out any idea of what is next. Where is his family? Will he see them again? Is he really all alone? He sits with a pondered look of uncertainty about everything that has just occurred.
In the distance another figure sits also covered in mud motionlessly. Who might the figure be? It is too far to make out any description. Unsure of the well being; dead or alive, wounded or in good condition. It is hard to see if it is even a man or woman.
What ever occurred seemed like something tragic to this place. Only time can tell what will happen for this young boy and who ever may be around him.
This was a tough photo to describe, for sure. But this report still had too much speculation and not enough hard-and-fast description. The boy’s pointing, his hair, his eyes all could have been included. Please be careful of sentence fragments. 4/5.